3896 and boys don't cry

[elfy]

i am writing so slowly. why?
in the story is a completely different mood than i have right now.
and i am still looking for double used words all the time and just want it to be... good.
i just can't write without controlling and thinking about what i write... except Cyrills fantasies, they are easy. and smut.
and as i read sae's nice bit of text i noticed another problem i have: i decribe things, but i don't tell about their past. not even for people.
you can't believe how sweet my cat looks, sleeping.
she bit through the cable of one of my boxes. i repaired it a bit, not really, but it works.

thank you emaendor for this nice pic. *hugs*

i had to think about the boys don't cry movie.
i really like it, but right now just to think about it too much could make me cry.

Comments

[sivan.livejournal.com]

Some of the best stories focus on the present instead of the past. A story doesn't need to talk about the past in order to be good ... sometimes it even needs to not be about the past, I guess. It all depends on the story.

Also, try to think about the editing later. I know how hard that is, but it really makes writing easier.

And take care.

[elfy.livejournal.com]

okay. maybe. gn. i will try to keep that in mind.

gnaaa! i can't! i want too! butbutbut... gngngngn.

*sigh*
thanks. *hugs*

ps: give a shout, if you want to read. :) broke the 4k mark. *happy*

Boys Dont Cry

[kaliteya.livejournal.com]

I think about the Boys Dont Cry film often, after watching it once it continually haunts me. very tragic and unexpected. i felt like my whole being was abused when feeling empathetic with the characters.